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06.07.2011 14:46    Comments: 0    Categories: Fiction Elements  Fiction Writing  Writing Beginnings  Writing Middles  Writing Endings  Writing Tips      Tags: beginnings  middles  endings  writing  vicki hinze  

Beginnings. Just like every chapter and scene within a novel has a beginning, a middle, and an and end, so does the entire novel.

The novel beginning starts when the novel opens and ends at the time the protagonist decides to act.

For the author of commercial fiction, writing an effective opening is critical. Studies show that an editor--the author's first reader--will develop an opinion of the work in the first three novel pages. If we are to encourage that editorial opinion, or impression, favorably, then we authors must carefully craft the novel opening so that anticipated elements are indeed presented in our opening pages. What are those elements?

First and foremost is what author/critical analyst extraordinaire, Laverne Brigman, deems the author's three primary responsibilities to the reader--the three Cs:

Capture, Captivate, and Convince.

Let's take a look at them.

Capture

We must capture the reader's attention. Meaning, hook the reader, draw him or her into the story. Often writers do this by raising a question that pertains to a universal theme (because those are readily recognizable to a majority of readers)--a question the reader wants answered.

Another method used by authors is to place a character in a situation that the reader finds interesting, so that the reader wants to know "what happens" to the character.

Example: In my first Seascape, Beyond the Misty Shore, the opening sentence reads: "T. J. MacGregor tried to leave Seascape Inn, but every time he crossed the property's boundary line, he blacked out."

The first question that typically comes to mind is, Why? That question raised, niggles at the reader, who then wants to continue reading to find the answer.

In Upon A Mystic Tide, I opened with: "Body language never lies." When I wrote that sentence, it raised a "prove it" attitude in my mind, and so the character's nonverbal language reflects that theme throughout the rest of the book, substantiating the claim.

Due to discretion, manners, wisdom, or a myriad of other emotions, we often don't say what we mean. But our body language seldom betrays our true feelings.

In the case of T. J. not being able to cross the boundary line, Robert Newton Peck, author of Fiction is Folks, calls this "matter out of place." Normally, people don't run into this situation--where they blackout on trying to leave an inn. So when T. J. does, it arouses interest because it's atypical.

By capturing the reader's attention with a strong hook--one that has a universal theme (one we can believe could happen to us, one we can identify with)--we create interest, curiosity, and empathy between the reader and the character. That interest spurs the reader to learn answers and to continue reading the story.

Captivate

As well as capturing the reader's attention, the author must hold it. Must captivate the reader into suspending disbelief, into feeling close to the character, into caring what happens to him/her. Very often this captivation is accomplished by the author introducing conflict.

Conflict is the backbone of the story. Without it, there is no story. For example, if in the second paragraph of Beyond the Misty Shore, I'd written that T. J. MacGregor felt guilty and that's why he couldn't leave Seascape Inn, the reader would have his/her question answered and wouldn't feel compelled to continue reading the novel. Why?

Because I would have introduced a conflict but not maintained it--the reader has no unanswered questions left to want answered--and the novel lacks balance.

In a novel, the main character must want something. Must have a specific goal. But if there isn't an antagonist (person, place, or thing) who attempts to stop the character from achieving that goal, or if the goal is an unworthy one (money is never enough), then where's the conflict?

The protagonist is expected to struggle to achieve some high goal: one worthy of an admirable character. A character the reader respects, wants to emulate. Without a worthy antagonist, the protagonist has no struggle. And without that struggle, the reader can't know that the character is admirable because there's no conflict through which the author can depict the character's admirable qualities.

One thing I must mention here. Conflict is not arguing, or the characters spatting with each other over trivial misunderstandings that rational adults would resolve through clear communication. Conflict isn't petty trials, or contrived situations.

The strongest and best conflict is one borne of the character. A hole, if you will, in their character, caused by something that happened in their past which, through the story events, the character will struggle and fill. This depicts character growth, which is essential in any novel. If the character remains unchanged at the end of the book, then there was nothing gained in the book. The character might as well have stayed home. And the reader will wish s/he hadn't wasted his/her time reading the book.

The bond of trust between the author and the reader must never, never, be violated.


So the protagonist wants something worthy. The antagonist wants to keep the protagonist from gaining that something worthy, believing himself just and right and perhaps even noble in attempting to stop this acquisition.

Remember, an antagonist who is pure evil is not nearly so formidable nor as chilling as one who is evil and strong and feels his actions are logical and just.

Introduce your conflict early in the opening pages. Plunge the character into the middle of trouble--matter out of place--and then craft the building conflict so that the character's ability to achieve this goal is dubious because a worthy antagonist with an agenda of his own is complicating the protagonist's struggle to achieve his goal. In doing this, the reader remains captivated.

Convince

Not only must the author capture the reader's attention and maintain that captivation, he or she must convince the reader that the story events are actually taking place.

It helps to think of this concept as a three-legged stool. Capture, Captivate, and Convince are each a leg. If any one of them is weak, the stool wobbles. If too weak, the stool collapses.

To convince readers, the craft-oriented author will incorporate several writer's tools to accomplish this task and set out to convince the reader on at least two levels: emotional and physical.

Emotional: By implementing a universal theme--easy for the reader to identify with--the reader can suspend disbelief, accept that what the author is saying happens can truly happen. The story events are logical and they lack convolution or contrived schemes.

Physical: Incorporating concrete, vivid details into your writing convinces the reader that he/she is on-scene. Your details create images in the reader's mind that plant him/her in the scene and permit the reader to become an active participant in the story. The five senses, incorporated, allow the reader to forget that s/he is reading words on a page and transport that reader so that s/he is living the story. (See the section on The Fictional Dream.)

Remember that the details you choose to incorporate in your novel do the work of several writer's tools. If the details carry dark and negative connotations, or ones we typically associate with fear or negative emotions, then you've manipulated the tone, set your novel as one that is dark and suspenseful--mysterious. If conversely you choose lighter-tone details, then that sends the message to the reader that this novel will be a less intense read.

This doesn't mean you can't mix light and dark conflicts/tones in your novels. You can blend them. But these first pages should set the tone for the overall feel of the novel, and to play fair with the reader, they should set that tone accurately.

My favorite examples of this method:

1. An old man is standing beside a pond. His son has just died. What are the details he notes? Murky water, moss-draped oaks choked by wisteria vines. Physical details which convey his emotional sense of loss and mourning.

2. Same pond. A young girl has just learned to ride her bike. What are the details she notes? Sun-spangled water, leaves blowing freely in the breeze. Physical details which convey her emotional sense of freedom and accomplishment.

An editor wants to be captured, captivated, and convinced by your novel, but s/he also wants to see specific story elements in those crucial first pages. What essential elements does the editor expect to see established there?

1. Setting. Where is the story taking place? Is the time it takes place evident and clear?

2. Protagonist. Because it's so commonly done in novels, the reader has become accustomed to and therefore expects, that the first person introduced in the novel is a major character. Most often, though not always, this first character introduced is the protagonist. If in your novel this isn't the case, make that expressly and immediately clear.

A caution: Don't laundry list the character's attributes. This is static, boring reading. Depict character traits you want the reader to identify with this character. Show the character in a specific situation that conveys those traits to the reader.

3. Conflict. Within the first pages you must initiate some type of conflict. It need not be a major conflict, but it must be one that raises a question in the reader's mind that s/he wants answered badly enough to continue reading..

4. Goal. What does the protagonist want? Why does s/he want it right now? If the protagonist wants nothing, or there is no reason s/he must attain that goal now, then you've got a weak conflict, or no conflict. You've got nothing that makes resolving this search critical to the character.

5. Remember the old journalism rule about "Who, What, When, Where, and Why?" Largely, this holds true for novels too.

Who defines the characters. The protagonist, antagonist, and supporting, secondary characters.

(A hint: After establishing the Point of View [POV] character, when you introduce a new character, give his or her relationship to the POV character. That way the reader can mentally slot this new person, and attach them to the story and existing characters in their proper place [story function].)

What defines the situation, the conflict, the story events. Simply put, the plot line.

When defines the time line, the sequencing of events in the characters' lives and the sequencing of story events.

Where defines the setting, both generally and specifically (Maine, on the cliffs, for example), so that the reader is (via sensory perception) anchored into the story and is then free to become a part of it.

Why defines character motivation. This might or might not be evident in the first few pages of the novel, but it should be at least obscurely defined or the story will impart to the reader those dreaded feelings of the story being convoluted or contrived.

Motivation is one of the strongest empathy tools an author can (and must) utilize. Remember to make your characters' motivations ones worthy of them.

Writing an effective opening which captures, captivates, and convinces the reader and imparts vital information without making the reader feel she's being force-fed that data is an art. It's one the writer acquires through experience, through reading novel beginnings and studying the craft techniques incorporated by other writers to determine what made that particular opening effective--or ineffective.

Just as editors look for anticipated, specific elements in those opening pages, they also look for elements they do not expect to see there. Elements that leap off the page for the wrong reason jar the editor's or reader's attention, and remind him/her that this story isn't real, that s/he is reading.

While "never" never applies in writing--there are always exceptions--be suspicious of the following opening elements and ask yourself if perhaps a different element would work harder for you:

1. The weather. It's been done to death.

2. Shock value. While sometimes effective, shocking immediately often isn't as valuable as waiting until the reader and character have established a bond. Once the reader identifies with the character, the reader understands how much the character has to lose. Then the shocker bomb carries more of an impact.

3. Opening with an arrival at a new place. Cliche.

4. Traveling to a new place. Cliche.

5. Forcing the reader to wade through pages of narrative telling him/her about the place and/or people in the novel. Again, narrative is stagnant. It brings any forward momentum of the plot to a dead halt. Dribble in this background information a few sentences at a time. Ask yourself: Must the reader know this information now for what is happening in the novel now to make sense? If so, add it. If not, wait until the information becomes essential and then add it.

An actual novel beginning might be a page or half a book. (The middle begins when the character decides to act against the conflict presented.) But for these purposes, the beginning refers to the opening pages of your novel.

Every writing rule made can be broken. As writers, our goal is to break rules not out of ignorance, but for a purpose. One that serves to make our stories stronger. One that aids us to capture, captivate, and convince.

[The "Capture, Captivate, and Convince" portions included here are based on a lecture by Laverne Brigman, author, critic, and President of Emerald Coast Writers Guild, who graciously permitted me to build a workshop around her Three Cs and to integrate that information here.]

 

 

© Vicki Hinze

 
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